For the Seventh Sanctum contest.
Fantasy Name Extreme Generator: Tempest Dark
Fangirl Fantasy Generator: The well-educated yet mocking half-angel. His
eyes are like two emeralds. His gravity-defying hair is indigo. His
exotic clothes are designed to deliberately show off his narrow build,
and he prefers them to be made from leather. He usually wears a lot of
Added content from other generators.
Fantasy Crossbreed Generator: The self-righteous male half-Angel mage.
His wardrobe is artistic. His non-human ancestry is very obvious and
not-concealable, but not particuarly disturbing.
Sword Generator: This sword has a blade with a blue hue to it. The guard
strongly resembles a pair of angel wings, inlaid with a copper-colored
Battle Aura Generator: A glittering silver aura. it is ever-shifting in
shape. when it is active, the wielder's eyes glow with a similar color.
"You're the son of an angel." Or so his mother claimed just before she
was murdered in cold blood. A quiet picnic in the palace gardens turned
He was only six at the time.
When the assassins turned their sights to him, he did what any
frightened child would do. He ran. His little legs just weren't fast
Born with only one wing, and with none of his mother or father's powers
at such a tender young age, he was helpless.
"Fly, if you can, you filthy hybrid." Those were the last words the men
spat at him before they hurled him over the garden wall and down to the
jagged rocks and crashing waves far below.
Somehow, he managed to survive the fall. Bruised, bleeding, cold, and
alone, he washed up on the shoreline miles away from his home.
For all counts, he should have died that day.
All he truly understood at that point was that he couldn't go back.
Ever. "Illegitimate" was a word whispered too often in the shadows. He
knew they had never wanted him there. His mother was the only one that
had ever wanted him, and because of that they had killed her. His father
hadn't even wanted him and had left long before he was even born.
He had to get as far away from the palace and the city as he possibly
Life isn't easy when you're a halfbreed.
Pickpocketing is impossible when you don't blend into a crowd, but other
forms of thievery were easy enough to pick up. Snatching a loaf of bread
or a pie from a window left carelessly open, or an apple off the fruit
stand. He survived that way for several years before someone finally
Instead of turning him over to the authorities, the old mistress of the
house took him in. He had grown into an insanely handsome young man,
even at the age of fourteen, and she had no heir to pass down her
impressive magic techniques to. He made the perfect candidate. Owning to
his obvious angelic and elven heritage, she also knew his powers would
begin to manifest soon, if they hadn't already, and he would need
guidance, lest he destroy himself and those around him.
He couldn't have gotten a better education had he been allowed to stay
in the palace. He had stumbled upon a grand master mage. And someone
that didn't care he was a one winged angel.
It was years later when he finally learned what "angel" truly meant to
His master's dying words. She had known the truth the whole time, knew
about the horrible experiments of twenty years ago, but out of the
kindness of her heart, she never told him, and never treated him as
anything but a beloved student... or even the grandson she never had.
He would never live a quiet life, not with the curse of having a wing--
the only "flaw" of his otherwise perfect and beautiful body. He had
tried cutting the wing off in the past, and failed. The wounds would
heal instantly, no matter how deep he managed to cut into it. It was as
surely a part of him as the blood flowing through his veins... blood he
cursed with every breath he breathed. And now his beloved master and
guardian was gone. The only person that had ever accepted him and loved
him was gone forever...
With a heart full of pain, he took the name Tempest Dark, and swore
vengeance on the ones responsible for his suffering, no matter how long
it would take to find them. He would strike them like a tempest and
leave them nothing but destruction in his wake.
No longer satisfied to be a hybrid with a single wing, there was only
one solution. He used his skills to fashion a second one out of a metal
stronger than steel, and bound it to his body by an unbreakable magic.
Under his master's training, his true powers had finally manifested, all
of the powers of his bloodlines were at his disposal, all the strengths,
none of the weaknesses, and now he had both wings. Nothing could stand
in his way.
He is feared by the scientists that experimented on his father, for they
have recently found out about the existence of Tempest. Also for the
fact the same organization murdered his master. He's feared even more by
the remainder of the Royal family. They dread he will one day realize he
is the son of the crown princess, and the last blood heir to the throne.
...and seen as a threat by everyone else because of his powers and
insanely good looks.
He's regularly chased out of towns. Unless he decides to blow them up
that is. (They explode in such nice pyrotechnic displays.)
On his journey of revenge he obtained Shinjitsu, a legendary sword of
great power, forged by the fire of the elder dragons, back when the
elves were still an infant race in the world. In more than a century the
sword had not taken a master, none that tried to tame the power of the
blade had been deemed worthy, and all had died in the attempt... until
Tempest came for it. Whether it was his burning soul or his hybrid blood
that made the sword take him as a master, none can be sure.
Shortly afterward, he was bonded to the blue fairydragon Ryuusei, a
wise, if mischievous companion... with a tendency to bite if anyone
other than his master touches him. He's usually found clinging to
As Tempest has something of a mocking, self-righteous personality with a
slightly mischievous bent, Ryuusei has proven to be his perfect match.
Tempest has an unusually bright battle aura, even for a mage of elven
decent. His eyes glow strangely when he uses a particularly strong (for
him) technique, or if infuriated. This aura is brighter around the
purely organic parts of his body, and is brightest on the side that
bears the angel wing.
When angered, his emerald eyes tend to turn to a lighter shade of green,
and may even begin to glow before his battle aura becomes apparent.
It's said the last thing his victims see before death is the dazzling
light of his magnificent powers, and they are awestruck. As such he's
called often called "The Shining Destroyer."
He also has a great singing voice, a given because of his bloodlines...
the revenge business just doesn't afford him much time to use it. He's
also skilled at playing the harp.
He can speak, read, and write in both the ancient language and in the
common language of elves and humans. As well as communicate with
animals, aside from his bonded fairy dragon. In fact, even rabid animals
are charmed by his mere presence.
Painter Acrylics, airbrush settings.
My personal diagnosis for this guy is that he is a DOA Sue. He also
scores a 167 on the Universal Mary Sue Limits Test, placing him very
firmly in the "Kill It Dead" category of 50+ points.
Remember, friends don't let friends read irredeemable Sue stories.
Thank you and goodnight!